I would appreciate comments on this one, especially from someone in recovery.?

I'm not in recovery myself but I know someone close that is , You are on your young steps to recovery , you know what to do .Each day you will feel stronger , eventually your will , will turn to iron and you know you can get through it . Each small step is a step nearer to becoming free but only if you truly want to , and it has to come from you , don't drag others down with you and only use them as a prop to get you over the worse days. You know you can do it, you have taken a giant step today but writing your poem , which made sad but full of hope for you .Good luck , people every day are setting themselves free.